Feedback on DPS

This is the first piece of market work that I have had back that has been marked and given a grade on my double page spread. As you can see it has a lot of improvement that can be done to move the grade of the work up further.

1st draft of DPS

This is the first draft of my double page spread. I have handed it in to be market and get feedback on. Also to see what improvements I can make.

2nd draft of double page spread.

As you can see I have changed some of the wording as it needed to be appropriate for the magazine and the interviewer.

1st draft of written piece DPS

This is the first draft that I asked to be marked so that I can get feedback and improve. When it was marked and gave back to me I noticed that I needed to change it so that the interviewer was not asking all of the questions.

3rd draft of contents page

This is the 3rd draft of my contents page that's been marked I need to make improvements on the image at the bottom of the screen and also the interviews section.

Organisation contacts

When I was planning to take the photos for my magazine I had to get in contact with the person who was in charge of the photo studio at my local university. Here is the evidence that I emailed the person and the confirmation that I could use the facilities that are there.

Double page spread

I have decided to change the look of my double page spread as I think it will benefit the way it looks as I can fit more aspects in and rearrange things better wen it comes to adding the contents.

Double page spread influence (draft 2)

When revisiting my choice of influence for my double page spread I changed my mind as the flow of the magazine did not flow correctly. I instead chose to use this, as I thought the layout was better suited to my magazine as I had a image that I wanted to use on it,which goes a lot better with this layout.

2nd draft of contents page

This is the second draft of my contents page, as you can see I have improvements to make. For example I can move the name and page number for the featured person up to the top left of the image to use up the space that is not used. Plus I need to use a range of texts, so I need to change the main header and the columns. Plus with if I rearrange different items on the page it will make it look better and more polished.