Feedback for my initial draft of front cover

 This is the initial feedback that I got from my first attempt at my front cover. As you can see there was a lot of improvement that I need to do to ale my magazine better. By doing this it will hopefully increase the final grade that I get for the overall magazine. The areas that I needed to improve on were that I needed to improve the use of texts used as there was not enough variety in the texts used. I also needed to adjust the masthead as it did not stand out enough which is one of the main part to the magazine.

Feedback for the perliminary task

This is the feedback that I got back form my teacher in regards to my preliminary task. The reason that I have has the feedback from this is to identify the key areas of where I had gone wrong and where I can improve. The areas that I did well on were the style of writing that I used and the columns were accurate when I out text onto it. On the front of my magazine the feedback that I received was that I had used a good central image and the colors that I used were appropriate for the magazine.

The improvements that I could make are that the image could have been moved up or positioned differently as there was a lot of unused space at the top of the magazine which looked unprofessional. The sell lines could also have been cleaner and closer together.