This is the initial feedback that I got from my first attempt at my front cover. As you can see there was a lot of improvement that I need to do to ale my magazine better. By doing this it will hopefully increase the final grade that I get for the overall magazine. The areas that I needed to improve on were that I needed to improve the use of texts used as there was not enough variety in the texts used. I also needed to adjust the masthead as it did not stand out enough which is one of the main part to the magazine.
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