This is the feedback that I got back form my teacher in regards to my preliminary task. The reason that I have has the feedback from this is to identify the key areas of where I had gone wrong and where I can improve. The areas that I did well on were the style of writing that I used and the columns were accurate when I out text onto it. On the front of my magazine the feedback that I received was that I had used a good central image and the colors that I used were appropriate for the magazine.
The improvements that I could make are that the image could have been moved up or positioned differently as there was a lot of unused space at the top of the magazine which looked unprofessional. The sell lines could also have been cleaner and closer together.
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